Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be made instead. -Do you agree or disagree?

Human beings have an important duty to protect the environment ,not just for themselves
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for the coming generation as well.
Trees
play a very critical role in
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maintaining
mainataining
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maintaining
healthy
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environment and planting
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trees
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there a contentious debate is often ignited as to whether
trees
to be planted in vacant areas or special housing facilities should be made for same .In the forthcoming
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we will discuss the two viewpoints.
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with, it is a common notion that
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should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns because
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efficient utilization of vacant spaces in the city and helps in keeping a check on growing pollution in the city.
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it
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value of
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and makes the area look more clean and
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. ,
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does not
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does not
require any special fund allocation and every local individual can contribute by planting and maintaining the
trees
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the roots of the
trees
often prevent soil erosion and
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dust. There is another section of people who believe that dedicated housing facilities should be made for planting
trees
. These will ensure
trees
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well maintained .
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of the people and proper supervision will
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option I think plants
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should
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should
be planted in vacant areas of cities as
this
ensures many more plants are planted than in normal cases .
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help
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trees
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become
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habit among people , a practice they will regularly follow
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