Write a short response on the topic: What does it mean to be Human? Interrelation between human beings and technology What is the difference between human, cyborg, and robot?

Can you imagine living in a world in which the view of cyborgs or
robots
wandering the streets is something usual? Isaac Asimov presented the positive and negative aspects of
such
a world in the science fiction novel I,
Robot
, published in 1950. In 2004 the book became a movie directed by Alex Proyas. The
film
stars Will Smith in the main role. The plot follows the development of a Virtual Interactive Kinetic
Intelligence
(VIKI), an artificial
intelligence
system that takes control of the NS-5
robots
. In the
film
, robotics and artificial
intelligence
are the core technologies. The
film
I,
Robot
represents the way in which
people
understand
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technology
and how
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technology
affect
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society. The special effects and animations in the
film
are stunning. The
robots
and cars are depicted in a very realistic way and the viewer
feel
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that they are real. The
robots
are shown as creatures with a high level of
intelligence
.
However
, they are electronic machines and can perform activities without
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external
assistant
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.
Robots
move
on
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the way that
are
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originally designed to act. The human beings in the
film
ensure that the
robots
are for specific work
,
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and that humankind will not become subordinate
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the intelligent
robots
. They are designed to follow the Three Laws of Robotics: never hurt a person or let a human
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harm it, always obey humans until the
First
Law is violated, and defend
its
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own existence unless the
First
or
Second
Laws are violated.
People
and
technology
are closely related to each other.
Technology
is a product of
human`s
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progress. What is more, it is the accumulation of every knowledge and
skills
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that came from the human mind, transformed, and concentrated
to
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a specific field of science
that is
used
production
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and research in every industry. Without
technology
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we cannot live. Computers, machines,
robots
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and robots
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are
essential
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part
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of human lives. How do we build houses, how do make clothes, how do we cook our food if there is no
technology
? It is used by
people
for different purposes.
Robots
save lives in surgery operations, teach students during lessons, clean houses and even can do far more complex cognitive operations, like sensing
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environment and
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itself
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as shown in the driverless car. Limiting the advancements of
technology
, we limit the ways our minds work. The title I,
Robot
signifies the
robot
as an individual.
Also
, the pronoun I
portrays
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self-consciousness
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and awareness of the
robot
. Sonny shows knowledge of his environment and the
people
that embody his surroundings. As the old saying goes “I think
therefore
I am”, Sonny and the other
robots
think and
therefore
they are. These
robots
are alive and evolve into human thinkers.
Although
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technology
is constantly evolving and computers are able to do a lot of intellectual work at a very high speed, human beings are more advanced.
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