Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In recent years number of commuting crimes dramatically raised. Almost every day humans face a different kind of fraud. So a lot of

people

insist on improving their security, whereas others argue that options for fighting

this

issue are limited. It is agreed that officials can significantly influence

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the

crime

rate

.

This

essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the

one

hand,there are some actions that could be done by the government and policemen to reduce

the

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crime

. And

one

of them is punishment should be harsher.

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, a lot of countries stand by humanity and that’s why all judgment should be humane too. Without any

doubt

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this

policy leads to increasing villainy because criminals are not afraid for their lives.

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Such

offences as murder or rape must be punished with capital punishment. It is clearly seen from criminals’ biographies that after

one

murder they always commit a

second

one

.

As for another

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kind of

crime

should be huge fines and imprisonment. Another way is to practice

crime

and at the same time eliminate it.

For instance

, in Toronto (USA) , several young law enforcement officers ,in order to have a thorough understanding of the organizational structure of criminal activity, are willing to pose as lawbreakers in order to infiltrate the criminal organization. After finishing

this

operation, they managed to prison a considerable number of criminals and raised

people

's

aware

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of a lot of fraudulent schemes. All these actions can reduce the

crime

rate

.

On the other hand

, it is hard to deny that it could be complicated to fight

this

issue.

Firstly

, due to

a

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serious structural issues in society

such

as the growing income gap between the rich and the poor. Everyone knows the Robin Hood idea.

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statement could invoke a huge number of

crime

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crimes

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.

Secondly

, it is believed that

mental

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healthy

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people

can’t commit a

crime

such

as murder or something like

this

. And neither government nor police officers can’t influence human mental disorders. But often

crime

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are committed neither because of Robin Hood's idea

or

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by mentally ill

people

. To be precise ,It’s nearly 15

percent

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due to

such

reasons. To summarise, often crimes are committed neither because of Robin Hood's idea

or

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by mentally ill

people

.

Therefore

it is clearly seen that authorities and police officers can influence

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crimes

rate

by taking smart steps. After a thorough analysis of

this

subject, it is predicted that the

crime

rate

should dramatically fall down after preventing actions.