Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In recent years number of commuting crimes dramatically raised. Almost every day humans face a different kind of fraud. So a lot of

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insist on improving their security, whereas others argue that options for fighting

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issue are limited. It is agreed that officials can significantly influence

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the

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rate

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essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the

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hand,there are some actions that could be done by the government and policemen to reduce

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crime

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. And

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of them is punishment should be harsher.

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, a lot of countries stand by humanity and that’s why all judgment should be humane too. Without any

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policy leads to increasing villainy because criminals are not afraid for their lives.

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offences as murder or rape must be punished with capital punishment. It is clearly seen from criminals’ biographies that after

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murder they always commit a

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.

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kind of

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should be huge fines and imprisonment. Another way is to practice

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and at the same time eliminate it.

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, in Toronto (USA) , several young law enforcement officers ,in order to have a thorough understanding of the organizational structure of criminal activity, are willing to pose as lawbreakers in order to infiltrate the criminal organization. After finishing

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operation, they managed to prison a considerable number of criminals and raised

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of a lot of fraudulent schemes. All these actions can reduce the

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rate

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.

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, it is hard to deny that it could be complicated to fight

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issue.

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, due to

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serious structural issues in society

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as the growing income gap between the rich and the poor. Everyone knows the Robin Hood idea.

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statement could invoke a huge number of

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, it is believed that

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can’t commit a

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such

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as murder or something like

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. And neither government nor police officers can’t influence human mental disorders. But often

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crime

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are committed neither because of Robin Hood's idea

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by mentally ill

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. To be precise ,It’s nearly 15

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due to

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reasons. To summarise, often crimes are committed neither because of Robin Hood's idea

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by mentally ill

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.

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it is clearly seen that authorities and police officers can influence

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crimes

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by taking smart steps. After a thorough analysis of

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subject, it is predicted that the

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rate

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should dramatically fall down after preventing actions.