Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In recent times, psychological illnesses have shown exponential growth in our society. They may not be directly visible
,
but are as damaging as any other disablement. Over a period of time, Remove the comma
apply
people
with physical disabilities have still found acceptance, however
, this
is not the case with someone
who have
psychological disabilities. Change the verb form
has
This
essay will establish that people
with mental illness
are being discriminated at professional
and personal Correct article usage
the professional
front
.
The most obvious challenge for Fix the agreement mistake
fronts
people
with psychological illness
is lack
of professional work life. Correct article usage
a lack
Although
,
both government and private sector is promoting employment for Remove the comma
apply
disabled
, it is limited to physical ones only. Correct article usage
the disabled
For instance
, people
with Autism, a psychological disorder, can do lots of normal and creative activities, but nobody prefers to give them a job. Clearly, our society is still not able to understand and accept the
psychological disorders.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, similar challenges are there in the personal lives of these people
. It is rare
sight to see Add an article
a rare
someone
with some mental illness
to
have a social group. Fix the infinitive
apply
Moreover
, it has been observed that even the
relatives and the family member do not Correct article usage
apply
support
. If Correct pronoun usage
themsupport
someone
, for example
, is suffering from depression, instead
of helping him, people
further
leave him alone. All these dynamics on personal
front make the situation even worse for Add an article
the personal
someone
who is already undergoing some mental condition.
In conclusion, people
with disabilities, whether physical or psychological, are very much part
of our society. ThoughCorrect article usage
a part
,
many initiatives are there to support them and enable them to lead a normal life, Remove the comma
apply
people
with mental illness
are still struggling to find acceptance at
Change preposition
in
workplace
as well as in their personal circle.Add an article
the workplace
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