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Some people believe that the government should continuously support the development of arts. Others believe that the money can be well spent on scientific research. Discuss both and give your own opinion.

#people #government #support #development #arts #money #research
The individual thinks it is better to set a budget to support
art
 in front of it, but some
people
 believed that it must spend on scientific research to improve our scientific and cultural knowledge. In my
view
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 spending
money
 on the scientific area is more necessary and vital for many reasons like the lack of knowledge we have to win
this
 competition from all other countries.
First
 of all spending
money
 on
art
 and entertainment is really good to support our artists and I believed that even it can be a good encouragement to born new
masterpiece
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.
For instance
, annual
money
 support can be an awesome incentive for painters or singers etc. The fact that helping them in their way, can improve the
art
 industry.
On the other hand
, some groups of
people
 believed that it is much better to spend
money
 on scientific investigation and experiments.
For example
, if government organizations spend some budget on climate change, they can find many ways faster and much easier to protect the
world
 in front of many dangerous circumstances. Due to many problems in the
world
 like lack of food, lack of a place for inhabitants, climate change, increasing prices and many other problems it would be better to invest in science, we can even save the
world
 and many
people
's life with these kinds of research. To sum up, investing in scientific research is my cup of tea, in my opinion saving
people
's life or the
world
's future at the hand of scientists are hundred
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per cent
precent
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per cent
 more important than
art
. Artists can bring and make incomes and improve their sales by advertising and they can spend
money
 on the development of
art
 but researchers can't spend a lot of
money
 to learn how to save
people
's life.
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