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Some people say it's more important to plant trees in open spaces in cities. cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Trees are used not only to decorate the city
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 but
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 healthy life. Trees are the light of the world, the liver and the beating hearts of the world's cities. They are play important role in
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 world as well as
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 lives, especially
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 change anyway improved air quality.
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, with the help them we can enjoy on hot days
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 because they are able to provide. Thanks to
this
,
this
 heat became a little more tolerable. Today, the population is increasing every day, so people in demand for
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house
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 even more. Some even have two or three houses. Nowadays multi-storey apartments are built rather than
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because several families will live in one building. Now almost everywhere you can see high-rise buildings. But the disease will become even bigger. Especially old people. After discussing both sides, I chose to plant different plants in the open. We can plant even a number of houses in gardens,
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of
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 will accommodate at least one plant
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