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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

#overpopulation #centers #world
These days, politicians often meet to talk about an important question regarding overpopulation since they have to understand how to face up to
this
 problem. Nowadays, as people have a better life quality and a longer life expectancy , their number has increased in developed countries over the years . Indeed, due to the
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 doctors can cure cancer and chronic disorders any
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 could suffer from since they might use sophisticated medical
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or her illness and efficient therapies to treat him or her .
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 depend on those who migrate to
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 countries due to the fact that they live in poverty or war conditions in the lands they stay in.
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 cities become too
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crowded, resources
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 as food and water start to decrease so we have to pay more money for our living. If we consume a large amount of coal, oil and gas, we, certainly, make the environment more polluted .
Furthermore
 ,
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 living in urban
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 might be numerous
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 due to fewer places to build houses. I personally think that the government should limit the birth of children
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 sex education in any school.
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renewable
 resources and
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 make taxes lower especially for people who manage a large family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
  • Living standards
  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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