You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear
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Sam, I trust
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in
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to
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my interest to join the Tax training, being held
at
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Oman
next
month. As it is closely related to my current role at work, I hope to make
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out of the training. I was informed that there may be a possibility to shift the dates from 13th November to 18th and, would be great if you are able to confirm.
Further
, I would appreciate
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you could please send me a copy of the agenda,
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for me to have an overall idea of the topics intended to be covered,
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in addition
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to the expected time of start and end. With regards to the accommodation, please advise if it will be included along with the mentioned cost, or
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have to find alternatives. As I have not visited Oman in the past, I am not familiar with the places,
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will require your assistance, if we are to cater for our accommodation.
Finally
, grateful if you can
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share the cost of the program and advise on the mode of payment. I am willing to pay the amount prior to my departure from the UAE. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Sonu Jose
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