You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear

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Sam, I trust

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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regards

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my interest to join the Tax training, being held

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Oman

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month. As it is closely related to my current role at work, I hope to make

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out of the training. I was informed that there may be a possibility to shift the dates from 13th November to 18th and, would be great if you are able to confirm.

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, I would appreciate

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you could please send me a copy of the agenda,

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for me to have an overall idea of the topics intended to be covered,

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to the expected time of start and end. With regards to the accommodation, please advise if it will be included along with the mentioned cost, or

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have to find alternatives. As I have not visited Oman in the past, I am not familiar with the places,

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will require your assistance, if we are to cater for our accommodation.

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, grateful if you can

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share the cost of the program and advise on the mode of payment. I am willing to pay the amount prior to my departure from the UAE. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Sonu Jose

josesonu1987

Nov 19, 2022

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