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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, there has been an increase in
second
-hand garb among the folk. I think
this
 happening could contribute to positive vibes among men,women and children because society couldn't west of money
this
 way.
Although
 personages work a lot in the world they do not have enough money to get new regalia. For
this
 reason, many people turn to gain
second
-hand wear.
First
 of all, when the community buy used sportswear, they can help the world by decreasing garbage and reducing air pollution.
On the other hand
, by increasing
this
 work population went to attend to the important things. And improving the knowledge
besides
 of think about wardrobe.
Although
this
 work has a lot of positive views, it affects the economy of
this
 industry. In conclusion, buying used dress help the world for some part and they help the community for saving money.
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