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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Crime
 is a major concern for any country or state. Especially in India, the rates are extremely high. There are many kinds of
crimes
 which have taken place to date and which have caused so much trouble and pain to the public.
Crimes
 are something which can be prevented with utmost care and caution. There are some
people
 who think corruption can be prevented with a lot of
actions
 taken and few believe that lesser
actions
 are enough. In the coming ,paragraphs we will get an idea of both opinions.
First
 of all
crimes
 in
places
 where there is carelessness by the
people
.
For example
, robbers find it easy to rob when the person is not aware and careless about his belongings.
Similarly
, other kinds of
crimes
also
 happen because of
this
 reason. There are certain
crimes
 which are inevitable and cannot be assumed by us that it is going to happen
such
 as killing or murdering a person. These
crime
 rates are very high these days
nonetheless
 of the precautions taken by the
people
. A high amount of action should be taken against
such
crimes
 to reduce the
crime
 rate, it requires a lot of
actions
such
 as installing cameras in public
places
, weapon detection machines , increasing the number of security systems and many more
actions
 can be taken to stop or prevent the
crime
 from happening. While some of them feel fewer
actions
 have to be taken, that only increases the number of
crimes
 happening due to a lack of security and necessary
actions
 not being taken.
This
 will only affect the number of
people
 being prone to
crimes
 and losing their lives and belongings. Less amount of
actions
 can be taken in
places
 where there are fewer chances of
crimes
 taking place.
Furthermore
, we can conclude by saying that it is necessary to take a lot of
actions
 to prevent
crimes
 to help
people
 live their lives peacefully and to live a life in which they don’t have to worry about
crimes
 taking
places
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