You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am just writing to express my feelings with regard to the cafeteria
that is
situated in my college and I eat a meal every day.
Although
almost everything goes smoothly,there are only a few things that need to be enhanced. I would like to point out that the service is very good.The staff is hospitable and kind.
Additionally
,the meals you serve are delicious ,particularly pizza and barbecue. As I mention above, drawbacks exist in your cafeteria.One of the primary cons of
this
coffee bar is the lack of variety of meals.The coffee bar has old decorations compared to others. It would be better if you could do anything in order to re-decorate it with different colours of wallpapers.
This
is simply because it may be more attractive for clients.
Furthermore
,I would be grateful if you could expand your menu by adding new and unknown foods. I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible Yours faithfully.
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