The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past few years, modern

technology

has become an integral part of people's lives. It is commonly believed that it significantly prevents and solves crime in society. I partly agree with

this

statement, as I believe that

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person's activity

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on the other side

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crime emerges.

First

of all, there are a great number of CCTVs installed at different

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public places

such

as ATMs, shopping Malls, airports, and many other corners.

This

is to monitor suspicious activities all day in and day out.

This

gives more security as

criminals

are aware of the camera and are afraid of being caught, so, no one dares to do anything wrong.

For instance

, earlier, it was risky to go out

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, but now

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safe due to CCTV installation. In fact, working parents can go their work, leaving their children at home in the presence of

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.

Therefore

, definitely advanced

technology

has reduced

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crimes

by 30-40%.

Nevertheless

, the development of information and

technology

creates cybercrime. Now, a lot of personal information is available online, and

criminals

can access personal data easily and can blackmail a person for finances. There are many other types of financial fraud being done by these

criminals

.

For example

, they create fraud

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and people believe it is an original website and transfer money to these

criminals

.

Moreover

,

technology

leads to many other

crimes

, as terrorists are

also

using

technology

to make

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blast

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other countries by sitting in their own countries.

Hence

, there are many new

crimes

have emerged due to

technology

. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that

technology

has helped out in preventing and solving some

crimes

in our daily lives by monitoring people's activities, but it emerges new

crimes

like cybercrime and advanced explosives, which are more dangerous