The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few years, modern
technology
has become an integral part of people's lives. It is commonly believed that it significantly prevents and solves crime in society. I partly agree with this
statement, as I believe that although
it monitor's
person's activity Correct subject-verb agreement
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but
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other
crime emerges.
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First
of all, there are a great number of CCTVs installed at different different
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such
as ATMs, shopping Malls, airports, and many other corners. This
is to monitor suspicious activities all day in and day out. This
gives more security as criminals
are aware of the camera and are afraid of being caught, so, no one dares to do anything wrong. For instance
, earlier, it was risky to go out during
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a camera
Therefore
, definitely advanced technology
has reduced the
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crimes
by 30-40%.
Nevertheless
, the development of information and technology
creates cybercrime. Now, a lot of personal information is available online, and criminals
can access personal data easily and can blackmail a person for finances. There are many other types of financial fraud being done by these criminals
. For example
, they create fraud website
and people believe it is an original website and transfer money to these Fix the agreement mistake
websites
criminals
. Moreover
, technology
leads to many other crimes
, as terrorists are also
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Hence
, there are many new crimes
have emerged due to technology
.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that technology
has helped out in preventing and solving some crimes
in our daily lives by monitoring people's activities, but it emerges new crimes
like cybercrime and advanced explosives, which are more dangerousSubmitted by shikha_dhingra on
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