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Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss bought of this argument and give your opinion .

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It is widely believed that
parents
 are responsible for their
children
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 upbringing which includes
also
 acquiring the ways and behaviours accepted in society. At the same
time
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 many are of the opinion that it is the pivotal role of schools to provide their students with the skills essential for their social life. I strongly believe that the more effort we make from both sides the better results we have on the way to building a prosperous and benevolent community. It goes without saying that
parents
 are the
first
 people to acquaint
children
 with the core principles on which we build our social life. That means that
parents
 give their
children
 the moral law according to which they are to behave and communicate with other people. Not do they just explain the rules and the expectations of society, but what is crucial, they support their words with their deeds,
otherwise
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 all their advice will be futile.
In addition
, at early age
parents
 are the most prominent and authoritative people in a child’s world,
therefore
 whatever is coming from the
parents
’ side will be taken with trust and belief.
However
, while growing up
children
 gain new authority, their social circle widens, and they strive to make their own decisions and blaze their own trails. At
this
 moment their peers’ and teachers’ opinions are the subjects to consider and at
this
stage
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 it is highly important whether they are able to get a valuable pattern of social behaviour.
On the other hand
,
parents
 tend to lose
the
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 influence on their
children
 and the latter often choose to listen to their classmates rather than to
parents
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. What is more,
in
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school age
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 they encounter a lot of different social situations which they have to cope with and rely solely on their own abilities and traits with no
parents
 backing up. Considering both opinions, I must admit that unless
children
 get a strong moral basis in their early childhood, they will never be worthy and reputable members of society. Only when moral principles are etched in a child’s mind can we speak about developing a reliable and dependable personality welcomed in any community.
Nevertheless
, only in a school-like environment where striplings have to forge relationships and adjust to the accepted norms and rules, can they try on social roles and rehearse their future social life in a safe and teaching environment.
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