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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that some
people
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 believe that cross-national
cooperation
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 is the only measure that can
be tackled
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 the majority of emerging issues.
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 I accept that
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 may suit many
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, I believe that not all acute problems can be coped with by international organizations. On the one hand, it is widely agreed that many issues have reached a global level and only through the
cooperation
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 of a wide range of countries can be addressed.
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, global warming is an increasing concern for humans around the world.
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, the famous Kyoto Protocol is the result of international
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, which has been implemented for many years in an attempt to reduce the emission of greenhouse
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.
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, our world is facing lots of terrorism, there are many murders and bombings which need worldwide support and assistance.
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, multi-national
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 needs to tackle terrorist acts of the Islamic State (IS), which have taken the lives of many innocent
people
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 around the world.
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, the most alarming problems can solely be coping with the local authorities.
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education, health, and poverty can only be solved by their governments.
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, global support aid is temporary,
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 governments have to implement better policies to develop their countries
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 and give poor
people
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 a chance to improve their standard of living.
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, corruption is an urgent issue that can only be dealt with through the independent development and reform of individual countries. The international organization has no authority to inquire about a country’s government, which can only be prevented by the residents and officials. In conclusion,
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 cross-national organization is an effective way of dealing with many acute problems, it seems to me that there are
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 a large number of urgent issues that require domestic resolution and action
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 of global support.
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