Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that some
people
believe that cross-national cooperation
is the only measure that can be tackled
the majority of emerging issues. Wrong verb form
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While
I accept that this
may suit many people
, I believe that not all acute problems can be coped with by international organizations.
On the one hand, it is widely agreed that many issues have reached a global level and only through the cooperation
of a wide range of countries can be addressed. Firstly
, global warming is an increasing concern for humans around the world. For example
, the famous Kyoto Protocol is the result of international cooperation
, which has been implemented for many years in an attempt to reduce the emission of greenhouse gas
. Fix the agreement mistake
gases
Secondly
, our world is facing lots of terrorism, there are many murders and bombings which need worldwide support and assistance. For instance
, multi-national cooperation
needs to tackle terrorist acts of the Islamic State (IS), which have taken the lives of many innocent people
around the world.
On the other hand
, the most alarming problems can solely be coping with the local authorities. First,
education, health, and poverty can only be solved by their governments. In particular
, global support aid is temporary, therefore
governments have to implement better policies to develop their countries,
and give poor Remove the comma
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people
a chance to improve their standard of living. Furthermore
, corruption is an urgent issue that can only be dealt with through the independent development and reform of individual countries. The international organization has no authority to inquire about a country’s government, which can only be prevented by the residents and officials.
In conclusion, while
cross-national organization is an effective way of dealing with many acute problems, it seems to me that there are also
a large number of urgent issues that require domestic resolution and action instead
of global support.Submitted by dhanapriya3456 on
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