In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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the owner of a
home
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people
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people
,
instead
of occupying a temporary
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apartment
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in some nations.
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behind it, as well as the consequence of the stream. In my view, having own
home
is a great essential step taken by a man
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toward
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his family and himself. To some
people
, owning a
house
refers many things
such
as
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fulfilling
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fulfilling
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of having
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your own
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home
, designing personal space with imagination and requirements, settling down in a place for peace, etc. It provides the feeling of safety and security, without paying attention
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house
rent
. Every month a huge amount of money
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by
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the landlord
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as the charge of
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, which
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the
people
under pressure who live
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rental
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a rental
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house
.
Besides
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rent
imposed by the
house
owner to the tenants became a burden day by day,
moreover
,
people
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forbidden
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forbidden
strictly from doing any change inside
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,
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it
become
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irritating who living in the
house
.
For instance
, the survey
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2019, based on
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city
house
rent
shows that
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house
charge
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increased
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by 25
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% from 2015-2017,which have a negative effect on the
people
who hire
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a house
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house
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and motivated them to
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for themselves. If
people
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possessing
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then
staying on
rent
, it will
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demonstrate
demenstrate
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demonstrate
more
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
than
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demerits
.
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of all, individuals
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will be
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will be
more careful
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maintaingthe
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maintain the
place they have
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rather
other
than they take
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care
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came
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of a rental
house
. They may not damage anything like walls,
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glasses
of windows, swages site, kitchen etc, as it is their own property, which damage would cost themselves.
However
,
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drawback
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drawbacks
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also
,
such
as,
people
may stuck in a city while it may demand shifting to another town for job or study
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purposes
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.
Sometime
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may face security and
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maintenance
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maintenance
problems which may
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charge
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. Though there are disadvantages,
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the positive
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sides of buying an
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apartment
apparent
appartment
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apartment
overweight the negative sides. To conclude, considering
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both points discussed above, the most logical conclusion to be drawn is that, possessing a
home
or an
apparment
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apartment
as
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is
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far better than staying on
rent
. In my opinion,
people
feel much
comfortable
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more comfortable
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in private property rather than charging a
house
for themselves. It gives
people
feeling
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a feeling
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of security and they feel rooted
themselves
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in themselves
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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