Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

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elevating the amount of

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facilities

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will help with improving public

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. In spite of the mentioned case, a lot of

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are convinced that we should create other ideas which will solve the problem with public

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in view of the fact that the

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thought would not have achieved all requirements. In my point of view, I believe that building lots of

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will accomplish

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problems

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while providing other measures are useful in

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. On the one hand, many think that the key to

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public

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is by providing a lot of

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facilities

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around. A big amount of tennis courts, football fields and

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for volleyball is essential for outside activities in every city. These measures will have increased

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number of

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who would like to

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exercises and

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sport

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. In the consequences,

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of solving the mentioned problem is one of the

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.

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, many

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consider

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that building a lot of

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facilities

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would not have found

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of enhancing the level of public

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.

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, they believe that there should be other methods for it.

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, there are many different

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classes organised by

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volunteers in my district in Kyiv. Since these activities started, more and more

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joined

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community.

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with these both statements. There is

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reason for arranging the

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also

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to be made by the government or the volunteers. In conclusion, I would like to

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the importance of providing and creating many

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way

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of solving social problems. I strongly consider that the

sports

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facilities

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and other

solution

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will increase the level of

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public

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.