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Nowadays, more people prefer to communicate via text message and email instead of face to face. Why do you think this is the best way? When is face to face communication necessary/

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In
this
 modern world, the style of contact has become changed with the invention of various methods of communication. Most folk advocate talking through chat and online Mail despite of in person. As it is more convenient and saves money makes them an excellent source of getting in touch but an occasion of celebration and emergency needs to be face to face.
To begin
 with, text messages and email are the easiest modes which may be sent anywhere and anytime.
For example
, studies have proved that 90 per cent of international students contact via test message to their family members in order to get contacted while there is so much time difference.
Thus
, they are more convenient to share personal information.
Besides
, people may talk provide the chance to talk to the point
instead
 of meeting him which saves quality time.
For instance
, research has shown that many businessmen sent emails to their employees when they set up any meeting or other purpose despite informing them in person.
However
, the event of celebration may require the attendance of people to add more colour and an opportunity to share their resentments with each other which could be hard to express via text and email. To exemplify, Indian prefer to attend marriages because they think
that is
 the time when they can reflect on how much happy they are along with seeing all their relatives in one place.
In addition
, In the case of any emergency
such
 as an accident, it is important to arrive in relation to see what help is required.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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