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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in tows and cities closing.

#growth #shops #tows #cities
In today's generation, shopping has been always very important whether be it household or personal.
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, the shops in towns and cities are at
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great risk as there is a growth in online shopping. I strongly disagree
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this
 because internet purchasing does not allow you to check the quality and size of the product and
also
 the payment and refund policies
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 a big concern. It is irrefutable that, spending without knowing the actual quality of the product is risky. The product shown on various e-commerce sites does not give you the perfect idea. As it cannot be touched one can never understand which material has been used for it. If an individual is purchasing a clothing item,there will be a problem with the size and at times even if it is mentioned they do not deliver the perfect size.
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, it will recently
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 in the news that there was
scam
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 on purchasing online products. The order placed was
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 a mobile phone but when the package was opened it had a toy mobile phone.
Moreover
, cyber shopping is
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never safe when it is about paying
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money. Due to the scam that
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 going on in the country one needs to be very focused during advisable to check the background of the e-commerce site.
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, the Jamtara scams are very famous all over the world. To sum it all up, the shops in
town
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 and cities are
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part of our society we need to give them opportunities rather than purchasing online with no guarantee.
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