Global,there have been high numbers
in
road traffic accidents leading to Change preposition
of
increase
in mortality rate Correct article usage
an increase
especially
among Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
young drivers. Some people have come Correct article usage
apply
with
the solution that Change preposition
up with
children
should undergo driving lessons even in Use synonyms
school
. I totally disagree with Use synonyms
this
point because they are still young and need more time for their studies,Linking Words
also
they are explorers and likely to explore what they are being taught without supervision. Linking Words
This
essay will Linking Words
expanciate
on the negative effects of having driving lessons at a young age.
The increasing number of accidents is overwhelming regardless, teaching Correct your spelling
expatiate
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explicate
children
how to drive in Use synonyms
school
shouldn't be an option.Use synonyms
Firstly
,Linking Words
school
Use synonyms
children
are too young to learn about driving while they haven't even Use synonyms
finish
learning their Change the verb form
finished
school
syllabus, Use synonyms
this
might cause distractions and Linking Words
discrease
in their academic performance. Correct your spelling
decrease
increase
Secondly
,teenagers are very inquisitive and curious about a lot of things since it Linking Words
part
of their developmental stage and if they are taught they might want to explore because they think they have the zeal to do it and thereby causing more accidents. Add a missing verb
is part
For example
, a few years back,my uncle wanted to teach my male cousin how to drive so he can pick up his younger ones at Linking Words
school
when he becomes an adult. Some months later,when his dad went to work,he started driving the car to parties and malls Use synonyms
instead
of him focusing on his assignments and Linking Words
school
work,so one faithful day he went out with his friends and became drunk Use synonyms
instead
of him to call a taxi,he was Linking Words
over confident
and went ahead to drive which lead to a major accident that involved cutting his limbs off, Correct your spelling
overconfident
this
was a tragedy in our family and ever since Linking Words
then
,my family especially the elders, are mindful of what they taught their kids cause they might experiment it when they are not at home.
In conclusion,teaching Linking Words
children
about driving at a young age is not safe but rather be taught when they have come of age Use synonyms
where
they are more careful and able to learn about the do's and don't Correct word choice
when
in
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