The widespread of the Internet gives people more freedom to work and study at home instead of traveling to office and school. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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the world has changed

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to the widespread of the

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. In the past,

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had to go to their company or school every time in order to be able to study/

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effortlessly.

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, after the

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come to the globe, it provided numerous opportunity which is useful for society. Most employees and students can

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at their homes

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of travelling anywhere whether can be a school or an office. In

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way, the advantages of using the

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outweigh the disadvantages. The most important existence of the

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is that it gives possibilities in

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's lives. Countless workers could not go to the office, due to Covid-19. They had to

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at their home despite the pandemic.

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to the

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,

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were able to deal with their duties which are related to the company.

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, when a salesperson gets sick, he/she is involved with turnover easily or when the pupils miss class because

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many reasons, they can learn again their information precisely

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to numerous video platforms.

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, they can save time efficiently.

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, the convenience of using the

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help ,everyone.

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, even though it has benefits, it brings many drawbacks in its wake. The

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pushes

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to comfort, even if

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situation is wonderful

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, is not. Because society who works at home is addicted ease which causes them to be lazy.

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, humans start to not do challenging duties, cleaning the house, walking on the street etc. In

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way, they are both lazy and irresponsible. Because humans are addicted to being comfortable. Because of

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the

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does not provide effortlessness. In conclusion, the

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continues to be in our lives

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time.

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it has disadvantages, it gives more freedom to

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and study in

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's lives

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to above these advantages.