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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. what is the reason? is it positive or negative development ?

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These days some developed cars are driven by artificial
intelligence
. As time goes on, technology has developed and
this
 may be the reason for using artificial
intelligence
.
Moreover
, as far as I am concerned driving cars by non-person thing is considered a positive trend.
First
 of all, folks of
this
 generation are thinking about improving their countries as well as the tech is moving and improving as fast as a blink.
In addition
, there are many schools and universities in which high tech and robotics are taught and most of the students show their interest in these kinds of subjects.
For example
, research by a diligent student at the University of New South Wales in Sydney has displayed that not only does everyone have a passion for computer science and artificial
intelligence
 but they
also
 use them in many aspects of life.
Secondly
,
on the other hand
, using artificial
intelligence
 for driving cars can be considered a pro and a positive development due to many reasons not only for people but
also
 for society.
Furthermore
, there are many folks who are lazy at driving long distances as well as short ones.
Thus
,
this
 technology can help them to move and travel anywhere while they are relaxing and laying down in their own automobile.
In addition
, the smart car can navigate the way, and diagnose the traffic, the traffic lights and the dangers which are threatened the car and its passengers.
For instance
, while you are sitting in a smart car, drinking your coffee and doing your work on your laptop, the automobile itself is driving and paying attention to everything happening around it.
Therefore
, you will arrive at your destination safely, without no stress and tiredness. According to what has already been discussed in the above paragraphs,
this
 is a positive development and improvement of technology that causes
this
 usage of artificial
intelligence
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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