The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or dis- advantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

In the recent world, especially after the COVID-19
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pandemic
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pandemic
, the number of people who
work
remotely from their
home
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has increased rapidly.
This
phenomenon was largely supported by the development of the Internet. As a consequence, people obtained chances to
work
flexibly without the stress of commuting
everyday
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.
However
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there are a few significant drawbacks of remote working as well. I will raise some examples of both benefits and disadvantages and
finally
want to state my opinion that the practice has more advantages overall. The most significant advantage of
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from
home
is its flexibility.
For example
, working mothers have more quality
time
with their children within their residences. They
also
have
time
to take care of their aged parents while working.
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, theoretically, we can
work
from anywhere around the world, where we can log on to the internet, as
such
, workers now have
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many options for places and
time
to engage in their jobs.
Moreover
, as citizens do not need to commute
everyday
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, there would be
less
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crowded trains and traffic jams. As a consequence, it is better for the environment.
On the contrary
, there are some risks brought by the arrangement. The
first
one
is diminished
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communications and human bonds between colleagues.
For instance
, at the beginning of the pandemic, we tried to do some online parties among
staffs
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at the office but we
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quickly
quicly
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quickly
realized that it was not efficient.
As a result
, we tend to meet each other on the web only when business requirements come up.
This
lack of communication
make
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some colleagues feel lonely and in serious
cases
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they become mentally unstable.
However
, overall, these disadvantages can be overcome if we wisely balance the
time
in
office
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and
time
at
home
. In conclusion,
although
there are a few serious drawbacks exist for
work
from
home
scheme, I believe the benefits
are
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far outnumber
than
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the drawbacks. It is a great new plan which can expand the possibility of working style for us and for the generations to come.
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