Some people think that many renowned personalities are popular because of their riches and extravagant lifestyle, rather than their achievements, and this influences the youth in a negative way.

Some people say that the majority of celebrities are well-known due to their wealth and luxurious lifestyle

instead

of their successes and

this

has a negative impact on young people. Overall I agree with the statement. In

this

essay, I will explain why.

To begin

with , the chief reason why stars and athletes are famous is social media.

That is

, the more financial aspects of their life are published on the Internet , the more their hard-workings and achievement will be ignored. A good example of

this

is Beckam`s family ,who have worked hard for many years ,all of their trips and cars are always on the websites .

This

in turn media content would have a significant effect on the audience about intrusive famous people .

On the other hand

,teenagers are likely to consider celebrities ,introduced whereby the Internet and News , as their role models. To put it differently , as long as the

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wealth and the fancy lifestyle of stars appear to the youth, they will probably set financial goals as lifelong ambitions . Take the low tendency of students for higher education

for example

; they tend to make money

instead

of going to

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university .So as result , not only society will be faced with a lack of specialists and inventors , but

also

the young miss a chance for personal development in their lifetime. To sum up , I personally take the view that the young can be affected inappropriately by the luxury lifestyle of well-known individuals .

This

is because, they are just represented through social nets as rich models, irrespective of their efforts

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