Some people say that the majority of celebrities are well-known due to their wealth and luxurious lifestyle 
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 , the more financial aspects of their life are published on the Internet , the more their hard-workings and achievement  will be ignored. A good example of Linking Words
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 is Beckam`s family ,who have worked hard for many years ,all of their trips and cars are always on the websites . Linking Words
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 in turn media content  would  have a significant effect on the audience about intrusive  famous people .
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 ,teenagers are likely to consider celebrities ,introduced whereby the Internet and News , as their role models. To put it differently , as long as  the Linking Words
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wealth and the fancy lifestyle of stars appear to the youth, they will probably set financial goals as  lifelong ambitions . Take the low tendency of students for higher education Remove the redundancy
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 the young  miss a chance for personal development in their lifetime.
To sum up , I personally take the view that the young can be affected inappropriately by the luxury lifestyle of well-known individuals .Linking Words
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