In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future,
driverless
vehicles
will be prevalent in our society. Concerning
driverless
cars
have various points of view because
automated
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operation system is immaculate yet. Despite
this
development, I firmly insist that
driverless
vehicles
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technology remains
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.
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suggests that unmanned
vehicles
are much
efficient
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than
cars
with
driver
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drivers
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. On one hand,
driverless
motor
vehicles
cause fewer accidents than
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humans
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because
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system will follow the input manuals while humans are prone to errors. Namely,
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the developer
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will train the system with sample situations,
therefore
,
driverless
cars
will conform to the given input.
Besides
, it helps to improve the quality of life of the socially alienated because autonomous
cars
help to move people who
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visual disturbance or
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disability. If they keyboard the destination to
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the driverless
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car, it will take them to the place.
Accordingly
, the possibility of entering society can be
further
improved.
However
, it can be clearly stated why many are against
this
argument. Based on my perspective, people must be exposed to constant apprehension so long as we take
driverless
vehicles
because unmanned
cars
are uncertain to believe surely. Machines
are
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possible
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to occur errors occasionally.
Moreover
,
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of responsibility is ambiguous. Someone should compensate or
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for the damage but in
this
case, we cannot sort out faults.
In addition
, individuals can feel that all human autonomy and free will is absent from their fate. In conclusion,
driverless
vehicles
contain potential drawbacks that should not be overlooked. To prevent direct
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, society should beware of new technology
such
as
driverless
vehicles
. It should be checked and accepted after a lot of trial and error.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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