Travelling abroad is regarded as a valuable and good activity for young people, but some think it takes too much time and money. Discuss both view and give opinion.

No one can deny that travelling outside of the nation is regarded as a beneficial and

well

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activity for new youths,

However

, others believe that it takes too much time and

money

. In my opinion, Travelling is a good activity and in

this

world travel abroad is so easy because many governments send

money

to their community as a gift I will discuss

this

in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, These days all regions will be developed with the contribution of technology and their newcomers are travelling out of the region are valuable trends for new kindergartens because they earn

money

on the internet on their own and they like to spend their salaries on vacation with their family to visit abroad

such

as Dubai.

In addition

, New networking sites are now

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send any work to the international level

due to

the start new strategy to develop their industry and they now send business trips for random coupes all over the globe which is useful for new youth.

For example

, In Germany, The local government select random persons each year and

sponsor

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them to

travelling

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travel

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abroad with national funds and

this

has good consequences on

nation's

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development and kindness.

Furthermore

,

Old

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comers believe

this

trend is not good because it takes too much capital, and long hours far away from their home province

due to

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their hires and they like their students will spend time with their parents to visit their own agrarian

instead

of abroad.

In other words

,

Money

and data are vital and they did not come back again because visiting other countries are more independent and know about others' cultural activities and are interested

to develop

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in developing

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our traditional festivals.

For example

, In France news channels reveal headlines that visiting abroad is not good for their national recession because their youths will set up in foreign states and

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not back to their First region which has an effect on their future advancement.

Thus

,

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bill

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and time are an essential part of life today because visiting outside of the country takes

money

and age as well. In conclusion, I would argue that travelling is good and

this

perspective will increase confidence and upgrade communication skills,

While

, Visiting foreign is too expensive, time-consuming and

increase

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knowledge to know more about history.