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In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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In many countries, traditional
food
 is being replaced by international fast
food
 which lowers once the tradition. In a country like
India
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 children like to eat fast
food
 rather than
having
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nutritious
food
.They avoid eating house-cooked
food
. The result
to
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this
 has many effects on families and society, the simple way for youngsters as well as elders gives them an attitude like
to eat
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 something out. It obviously creates many differences and leads to different problems.
This
 problem has been rose since the year fast
food
 has discovered. Fast
food
 can be eaten once a week which will not
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 our health and will maintain our weight. Not only
this
 it
also
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 necessary to eat healthy
food
 which is cooked with hygiene in our kitchens as well. Junk foods will not give us proper vitamins and nutrition but will give us excessive fats in our body.
one
 should have a healthy lifestyle. As it has adverse effects on families it lesser the bond with them and not only that but
also
 influence another individual to eat because the items
itself
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looks
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 tempting and
one
 could not stop from
having
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themhaving
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. I totally
agree
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onagree
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 the fact that fast
food
 has taken place of traditional
food
 because it is very convenient for them to buy while returning home so that they do not pressurise themselves to cook.
One
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thinks
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think
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thing
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 eating healthy from outside will keep them healthy but the reason
to
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for
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this
 has risen every year. They fall sick and often suffer from
food
 poisoning diarrhoea and other reasons as well.
This
 gives a negative impact on
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an individual
the individual
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individual
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individuals
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for example
 we do not see what kind of products are they using, what if they are using all expire products and how hygienic they make. Even in
the
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big
restaurants
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 there is no hygiene they don't keep their surroundings clean. To overcome
this
 problem families and society should not encourage
such
 things and force
one
 to eat junk every day and make a routine of their lives.  The conclusion to
this
 is that
one
 should avoid eating outside rather
doing
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than doing
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this
they
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one
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 should follow a healthy lifestyle
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