Stidents should pay tuition fee by themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
students
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having on young age loans because they need to pay for their own intuition. I believe that
everyone
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needs access to
education
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but is not only responsabilty from the government. In
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easy I explain in which extend someone needs to pay for their own
education
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. On the one hand it is not possible for
everyone
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to pay for their
school
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. By forcing all
students
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to pay for their own
education
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the not wealthy
children
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will be left out to having the possibility to become a doctor, laywer or following another expensieve
school
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program. If
everyone
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needs to pay by themselves we creading a schoolsystem
that is
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only accessable for
children
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from rich parents.
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: underpriviliged
children
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with very good grades can not become a doctor because they can not afford to pay
school
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program. The countries up with only the privilege
children
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with no good grades but they get good
education
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on the best university. The best
students
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will be left out for
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opportunity.
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, we can not expect that the goverment pays for all the intuition because the costs are to high.
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: if all the money goes to
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than healthcare will be left out for a part in the government funding.
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, by giving
everyone
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easy access to free
education
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there is a change the
students
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have less motivation to finish their program.
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it is better to a having pressure to finish
school
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in not to high cost. The governement help out by giving grants to
students
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with good grades and by finish
school
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they have not debts left to pay off. In conlusion, I believe we need to educate the
students
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who can become the best doctors, scientist, etc.
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the governemnt need to have programs to help out for the
students
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who not can affort to pay for the
education
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, but it does not need to be free money. I believe a performance grant is a good option for the governemt and a underprivileged student.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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