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Young people are highly influenced by famous people and they look up to them as role models. Is that a positive or a negative development.

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Teenagers
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 generally are affected by
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celebrities
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 and are inspired by them, they look up to them. A plethora of
youth
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 so in awe, to the extent that they start imitating them.
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 kind of behaviour might prove to be toxic or good depending on the person being admired. both good, as well as bad, can be derived from
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 behaviour.
Celebrities
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 inspire the
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 easily because they are highly regarded by the
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.
Celebrities
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 can portray a good example to the
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 through their fair moral conduct, as they are regarded as heroes by the
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.
Teenagers
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 will obviously try to imitate them.
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, if a celebrity were to address people to take recycling on a personal level,
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 the majority of the
teenagers
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 who follow them would consciously follow the advice. So, a teenager looking up to a Celebrity might be a good opinion.
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, not all
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 are morally good, so it might
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 not be an idea for a teen to look up to them. Some
celebrities
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 don’t behave
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 on the screen. There a many platforms which do not sensor socially evil behaviour, there are many people in the limelight, who show up on stage while under the influence of drugs, and when
teenagers
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 watch the famous icon doing that they might regard it as “cool behaviour”.
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, it might not be beneficial for the young to look up to
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celebrities
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. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons to it. The situation all narrows down to the celebrity they admire.
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