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Essay topics: Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree?

#topics #students #school #university #lessons #teachers #sources #television #internet
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 mini bunker in the shape of
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,
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 looks like details of the Tetris game, which were dropped by passing Aliens. For unspecified reasons,
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house
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 was named Miami. The owners wanted to build
a
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housing with an area of 160 square meters and meet the amount of 87K USD.
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, the architect let them know, that it is impossible, and,
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to build
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house
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 cost 108K USD and almost without walls. The interior is designed in a minimalist style with ordinary stripes, concrete floors and furniture made from untreated wood. Windows and floors have
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 saturated
shade
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 of wood and create appealing contrast and
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 concrete’s bold
color
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.
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 construction is located in the suburb of Portu on the seashore and is a
dream-
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dream house
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house
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 of minimalism fans. Estonian company CODA invented
movable
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 mini-
house
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, which able to be as temporary accommodation or used as
country
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a country
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house
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 option for vacation.
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house
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is better suit
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 for students and older people.
Cost
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 of
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house
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 is only 194K USD.
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 price includes delivery and installation of property, and
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 installation of communal and household equipment.
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marvelous
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 hose can be delivered to
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 location and can be assembled within just one day by crane.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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