Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many
problems
start to appear in the environment around us causing changes in our life. Some people
think that the major environmental problem
of our time is about
the Change preposition
apply
extinct
of some Replace the word
extinction
animals
and plants while others say there is
more important Change the verb form
are
problems
that need our attention. I believe there are important environmental problems
that we need to focus on them.
extinction of one species can cause many environmental changes. All habitat
had Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
its
own Correct pronoun usage
their
ecosystem
, thus
any change occurs
to any species that are involved in Correct pronoun usage
that occurs
this
ecosystem
may change the entire ecosystem
and many environmental problems
will Correct your spelling
appear
apear
, to illustrate Australia has one of the most diverse Correct your spelling
appear
ecosystem
in the world, in the early 20th century the Change to a plural noun
ecosystems
last
tasmanian
tiger extinct, many years later various Australian cities complained of Change the capitalization
Tasmanian
rapid
increase in another animal called the Add an article
the rapid
a rapid
Tasmanian
devils. Those devils were been hunted by the Tasmanian
tigers, however
when the Add a comma
,however
Tasmanian
tigers extinct, the Tasmanian
devils continue reproduction and increased rapidly causing problems
to
Australian Change preposition
for
people
.
In contrast
, many different problems
are more critical to people
, like the
global warming. Correct article usage
apply
This
critically important problem
become an area of interest to a large number of people
, this
increasing awareness about the
global warming came from its enormous impact on our life, global warming is causing changes to many Correct article usage
apply
animal's
habitats, vegetation, food, and water sources. Fix the agreement mistake
animals'
subsequently
it forces Add a comma
,subsequently
animals
to migrate and may cause extinction
of some Add an article
the extinction
animals
because they can not adapt to a new different habitat.
In conclusion, there is
different Change the verb form
are
problems
regarding our environment, some people
think the main problem
is about losing some animals
and plants, however
, some think there is
other essential Change the verb form
are
problems
, global warming for instance
. I believe global warming is increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
problem
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