Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many

problems

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start to appear in the environment around us causing changes in our life. Some

people

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think that the major environmental

problem

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of our time is

about

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the

extinct

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of some

animals

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and plants while others say there

is

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more important

problems

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that need our attention. I believe there are important environmental

problems

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that we need to focus on them. extinction of one species can cause many environmental changes. All

habitat

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habitats

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had

its

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own

ecosystem

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,

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any change

occurs

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to any species that are involved in

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ecosystem

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may change the entire

ecosystem

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and many environmental

problems

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will

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appear

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appear

, to illustrate Australia has one of the most diverse

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ecosystem

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in the world, in the early 20th century the

last

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tasmanian

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tiger extinct, many years later various Australian cities complained of

rapid

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the rapid

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increase in another animal called the

Tasmanian

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devils. Those devils were been hunted by the

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tigers,

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however

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when the

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tigers extinct, the

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devils continue reproduction and increased rapidly causing

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to

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Australian

people

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.

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, many different

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are more critical to

people

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, like

the

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global warming.

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critically important

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become an area of interest to a large number of

people

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,

this

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increasing awareness about

the

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global warming came from its enormous impact on our life, global warming is causing changes to many

animal's

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animals'

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habitats, vegetation, food, and water sources.

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subsequently

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it forces

animals

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to migrate and may cause

extinction

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the extinction

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of some

animals

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because they can not adapt to a new different habitat. In conclusion, there

is

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different

problems

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regarding our environment, some

people

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think the main

problem

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is about losing some

animals

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and plants,

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, some think there

is

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other essential

problems

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, global warming

for instance

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. I believe global warming is

increasing

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problem

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that needs our direct attention and all of our power to stop it