Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the number of countries that soften their law because of the humaneness conception dramatically increased. And that’s why a lot of punishment became replaced with
rehabilitation
. So , some people
support such
changes whereas others argue that rehabilitation
it’s not enough. It is agreed that long prison terms are vital for general stability. This
essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
On the other hand
, actually rehabilitation
might influence on
intruders in a positive way. Change preposition
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Furthermore
, a significant part of people
believes that rehabilitation
is the key to treating these people
and preventing them from committing the same crimes
when they get out of jail. For instance
, in Switzerland, rehabilitation
is widely practised instead
of long prison terms. People
who committed crimes
due to mental disorders start treatment in a prison and then
are transferred to special institutions where they continue treatment until complete recovery. This
applies to drug addicts and people
with various mental disorders. In general ,quite reasonable practice.
On the other hand
, even after full recovery
there is a high probability that Add a comma
,recovery
people
will commit the same crimes
again and again. For instance
, in the USA , criminals are more prisoned than rehabilitated. Furthermore
, in
the USA is the highest indicator of imprisonment in the world. As a lot of Americans believe that criminals always remain criminals . They reckon that offenders could imitate recovery in order to be freed Change preposition
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more
quicker. From my point of view , humans who managed to commit heavy Change the word
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crimes
ones,
will do it again . Remove the comma
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Also
,it is proven by a lot of psychiatrists that you can’t be sure for 100 percent
that a person is fully recovered and no longer suffer from the disorder.
To summarise, actually Change the spelling
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rehabilitation
it’s a not bad idea. But people
will feel more
safer themselves if long prisons term will be applied at the same time. Change the word
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Therefore
, rehabilitation
won’t replace imprisonment completely and authorities should be focused more on long terms rather than rehabilitation
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