Government should spend money on railways rather than roads What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is

one

of the crucial transport

system

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. Government,

therefore

, should

be

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invest money

on

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a

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railways rather than roads. I agree with that statement because there is no

traffic

and it is safe.

Traffic

is

one

of the biggest problems in many countries and it becomes

nightmare

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for them nowadays.

In addition

,

public

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the public

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cannot reach

in

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their destination on time and sometimes

traffic

takes about 2 hours to be free.

Hence

, some people who have

interview

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or pupils

whom

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have exams

they

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miss the interview or examinations.

However

, to tackle

this

problem administration

have

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to build more railways

then

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roads because

this

transit method has

one way

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road

that

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means there is no

traffic

. Individuals,

thus

, will

able

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to arrive on time

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their location. Namely, a survey of RoadCentre showed that 87%

Japanese

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and 79%

South

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Koreans are using

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train

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for transportation. At present, road accident is increasing dramatically and many people lost their lives because of

this

. The reason behind

of

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it,

that

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is time and unawareness. Many bikes and car drivers are wanting to go to their target as fast as they can and eventually they lost control because of

over

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speed and make

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an accident

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accident

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with

opposite

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vehicle

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or

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some of them are not aware of

rules

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even though they do not have

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a licence

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licence

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. In order to solve it,

railway

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the railway

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is the best option.

Moreover

,

this

conductance system has many advantages and most important these two reasons.

Firstly

, every

train

driver has

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a licence

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and they

are certify

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by

government

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the government

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.

Secondly

, because of

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a train

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train

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can run faster as much as it can there is no problem.

For example

, Japanese trains are bullet trains and these trains are running 495 kilometres per hour. In conclusion, I think other transit methods are

occasion

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the occasion

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of

traffic

which brings many problems and

also

reason

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the reason

a reason

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of death.

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, using

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a train

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train

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can be

solution

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the solution

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.