SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT A SENSE OF COMPETITION IN CHILDREN SHOULD BE ENCOURAGED. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT CHILDREN WHO ARE TAUGHT TO CO OPERATE RATHER THAN COMPETE BECOME MORE USEFUL ADULTS.

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It is often argued that competitive children are much better than cooperative youngsters in many spheres of life as a child and
adult
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. I think that every person despite
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age has their own individual
skills
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that
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unique and useful for various occurrences.
To begin
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with, competition is
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ability for growing independent and being confident among other rivals.
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, competitive
people
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are less desired to obey
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rules and leads, which is a horrible trouble in
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. While cooperative young
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are more like to be good leaders in group
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.
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, they are seemed to hand
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teammates, and it is a bit hard
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them to make tasks
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their own.
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competitive workers have their own
principals
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, so they are having difficulties with colleagues in choosing
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way of problem
solution
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at the job. Struggling at
workplace
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has cooperated ones
to
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, in the individual projects in the office they are more like to fail their report assignment. Both
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of skilled
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has own benefits
as
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disadvantages too.
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, competitive individuals are
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from
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their natures, it is hard to imagine them without clear goals for
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life and, they are doing
best
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of trying to achieve
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dream
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despite the difficulties on the way.
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, achievers are mostly popular
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game players or professional dancers with a worthy motivation to be number one. But cooperative
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have improved social
skills
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, which is important to make
higher
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reputation. Socially developed workers are creative for new
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works and have a big chance of promotion in
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their career
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career
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. So, everyone
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of
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being competitive
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or cooperative side
making
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good achievements and results in special occurrences. To conclude, children
high
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sense of competition seemed to be
good
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and independent
achiever
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achievers
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with unique
principals
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principles
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and cooperative young
people
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will grow as
a good leaders
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a good leader
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and best team
worker
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workers
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with improved social
skills
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. I think
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both
of
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personal
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skills
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are good enough and there is no
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to choose which one is best.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of competition
  • motivation and personal growth
  • competitive environment
  • strong work ethic
  • real-life scenarios
  • stand out and differentiate
  • essential social skills
  • common goals
  • personal and professional life
  • community and collective success
  • shared success
  • altruistic and compassionate behavior
  • reduce pressure and anxiety
  • less stressful
  • enhanced mental well-being
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