You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful was the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.
Dear Sir/Madam,
With due respect I am writing to you, I am Asma, I recently completed your subject, which was included in my course
of
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borrowed a Unnecessary verb
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book
from you named " Early Child Development " written by Dr.
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Dr
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Shelly. The Change the punctuation
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book
is based on adolescent early stage
development, as well as it includes activities that may help Add a hyphen
early-stage
developing
motor skills Wrong verb form
develop
besides
other skills of 2-5 years children.
The book
was helpful to me as it contains the topics i
needed to understand and help me Change the capitalization
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on
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with
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. It possessed Correct your spelling
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many
advanced information, which assisted me Replace the quantifier
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sorrow
I beg your pardon for not returning your Add a comma
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book
in time. Due to my sickness I unable
to return it within Add a missing verb
am unable
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as I promised. I hope and pray that you would consider it with Add an article
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the week
kind
heart.
Thank you for your support.
Your Faithfully,
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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