You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful was the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

Dear Sir/Madam, With due respect I am writing to you, I am Asma, I recently completed your subject, which was included in my course
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"child development ". During the
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I
had
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borrowed a
book
from you named " Early Child Development " written by
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Hasan and
Dr.
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Shelly. The
book
is based on adolescent
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development, as well as it includes activities that may help
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motor skills
besides
other skills of 2-5 years children. The
book
was helpful to me as it contains the topics
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needed to understand and help me
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thesis
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. It possessed
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advanced information, which assisted me
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explaining
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the topic
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in
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. With
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I beg your pardon for not returning your
book
in time. Due to my sickness I
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to return it within
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as I promised. I hope and pray that you would consider it with
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heart. Thank you for your support. Your Faithfully, Asma
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