In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everthing they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree

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across centuries according to the
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of the resource. Back in the old ages,
people
read from stones and pieces of fabric,
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books
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simple
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for reading and knowledge
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that
books
continued as the preferred resources until the internet was found.
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,
books
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online
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, after
this
some
people
think that online
books
will replace printed
books
and newspapers. I totally agree with
this
belief, and I think that online
books
are the future.   Online
books
are cheap, accessible, and easy to get anywhere and at
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.
For instance
, when a doctor needs to search for some medical information in a medical
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or textbook, he will download just download it and read
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, while if he
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to use his printed
book
he has to take all his
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with him and
that is
physically impossible, so it will be easier and practical to use online
books
rather than printed ones.  
In addition
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are environmentally friendly because there is no need for paper to be printed and
subsequently
there is no need to make
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out of the trees, eventually more forests will be preserved, a study was done at the national university of Seoul, it showed that each
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book
industry
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about 3% of the world's vegetation coverage.
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a lot
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a lot
of
people
will support using online
books
more than printed ones.   In conclusion, online
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are the future of learning and
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agree with that because they are cheap,
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accessible
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, easy to get, and
moreover
environmentally friendly. So, in the upcoming future
people
will no longer buy printed
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online and sometimes they may find
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for free.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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