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Some people believe social media is very important in our daily life, other believe it is waste of time. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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In the
last
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 decades the way
people
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 communicate with each other has experienced a notorious revolution, and social
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 is the responsible for
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 significant transformation.
This
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 method of communication has its supporters and detractors: the
first
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 group argues that social
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 plays a capital role in our lives, but the
second
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 supports the idea that it is just a loss of
time
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. I believe that both points of view can be right to a certain extent, as I will evaluate in the present essay. On the one hand, nobody can deny the fact that social
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 has become an essential part of our society.
People
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 might not probably imagine their lives without social
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applications
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 as WhatsApp, Instagram, Twitter or LinkedIn, anymore.
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, we use them for a wide range of activities,
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 communication, leisure purposes, express our opinions, build relationships both in private and professional context, etc. To illustrate the impact of social
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 in our lives, we can think about wheter the public could stop using instant messaging
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 as WhatsApp; in my opinion
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 is highly unlikely to happen.
On the other hand
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, it is undeniable that these
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 are designed not only to respond
people
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's necessities but
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 to catch our attention as much as possible.
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, if individuals are not able to control the usage of these
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, they can fall into their trap and spend an excessive amount of
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 while using them.
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, many
people
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 check their messages or social
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 when they are with their friends,
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 of enjoying the
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 with them.
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, some social
applications
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, namely TikTok or Instagram, are well-know for absorbing plenty of
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 of their users, as they have an addictive impact on them. In conclusion, I agree with both statements: social
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 is a cornerstone in today's society and it
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 can be a loss of
time
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 on certain occasions if it is not used adequately. I believe the best solution would be to learn how to live with
this
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 tool and learn how to use it in a correct manner.
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