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Despite health warning,a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world.Why should we be concerned about this ?What solutions would you suggest?

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There is no doubt that these days a large ratio of
people
 who are consumed smoke spread across all continents.The question is, does smoking will disappear in the
next
 years and
people
 become aware of their well-being?What is the best solution to prevent
this
 terrible phenomenon from spreading more and more?In
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 I am going to discuss these problems and draw my own conclusion. In terms of bad causes, the smoker is a part of our dear families, and the main reason given to support
this
 claim is, if the smoker is the father, it will be a horrible issue which makes the family suffer.To illustrate, Smoking is the main reason
for
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 various diseases
such
 as lung disease, asthma, and different types of cancer diseases.
In other words
,
people
 must be very concerned about their health because smoking made society prone to collapse.
As a result
, the hospitals will be full of patients with serious health issues
thus
 costing the government and families a huge sum of money which is supposed to be spent on the positive side.
Moreover
,
people
 should be looked after their health and save the money
that is
 spent on one packet of cigarettes which is supposed to spend the same price on healthy products or on healthy meals
instead
. In conclusion, it is evident that smoking had existed since ancient times that's why I am convinced that, the government should impose a very high proportion of taxes and community awareness of the harms of smoke in workplaces and entertainment must be spread.
In addition
, providing free clinics everywhere helps
people
 who desire to quit
this
 destructive habit.
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