The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries, there is an increasing number of
employees
who work remotely from home and this
trend is growing in popularity. Although
,
there are some minor implications related to Remove the comma
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home-based
work environment, the advantages definitely Add an article
the home-based
a home-based
outnumbers
its demerits.
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outnumber
To begin
with, a vast majority of big enterprises tend to recognise the benefits of online working on the productivity and general satisfaction of their employees
, therefore
they tend to be flexible in their approach to offer their employees
the option of hybrid working from the comfort of the home. Undoubtedly, the main advantage of online working is the
convenience which results from the fact that Correct article usage
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employees
do not need to waste time
on daily commute
which is cost-effective and could be spent on more productive activities.Fix the agreement mistake
commutes
For example
, workers who have family,
can allocate the Remove the comma
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time
saved on daily
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their daily
commute
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commutes
on
quality Change preposition
to
time
which
they could spend with their beloved ones. Correct pronoun usage
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Moreover
, since workers do not need to use their personal vehicles, this
contributes to reduced traffic congestion in the city and improved air quality since reduced
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the reduced
amount
of toxic fuel fumes.
On the other side, despite detrimental benefits which can help improve Correct article usage
the amount
the
general employee satisfaction and Correct article usage
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the
air pollution as well, online working might have some minor implications. Correct article usage
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Although
,
single workers might not see a dramatic difference between office and online working, Remove the comma
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then
employees
who need to balance between
their professional career and childcare might find it extremely challenging and Change preposition
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hence
might prefer working from office
as a way to escape from daily family stress.
To summarize, Correct article usage
the office
although
employees
might have their own preferences regarding their working environment, the significant advantages seen in the examples of saved time
and environmental benefits, definitely outnumbers
its minor drawbacks.Correct subject-verb agreement
outnumber
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