you recently received a letter from friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job .you think he/she could get a job . write a letter to this friend .in your letter say why he/she would not going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John
I am writing
this
letter regarding asking my suggestion to attend college for an MBA
degree or join the Tim Horton chain of cafes as a cafe manager.I would like to tell you that please don't join the MBA
course right
now . An MBA
course is a sure-shot way to a plum corporate job in any sector
.If you join any Tim Horton cafe chain as a Manager you will get valuable work experience . Which will be counted as corporate work experience post-MBA
I like to suggest that I have done a google search and found out that fresh graduates' retail jobs are the best jobs available right
now. as we have discussed on the telephone getting a job is a good option for your career right
now. We discussed that pursuing a course of any kind won't help you gain valuable corporate experience.
I will suggest you opt for jobs in the retail sector
. As this
sector
is growing exponentially and there are a lot of opportunities available. positions like store manager , store cashier, and shopping assistant are very much in demand right
now.So my suggestion is that please work in the retail sector
for two years and then
pursue an MBA
degree.
All the best
Rony.Submitted by yash334 on
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