you recently received a letter from friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job .you think he/she could get a job . write a letter to this friend .in your letter say why he/she would not going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear John I am writing
this
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letter regarding asking my suggestion to attend college for an
MBA
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degree or join the Tim Horton chain of cafes as a cafe manager.I would like to tell you that please don't join the
MBA
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course
right
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now . An
MBA
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course is a sure-shot way to a plum corporate job in any
sector
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.If you join any Tim Horton cafe chain as a Manager you will get valuable work experience . Which will be counted as corporate work experience post-
MBA
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I like to suggest that I have done a google search and found out that fresh graduates' retail jobs are the best jobs available
right
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now. as we have discussed on the telephone getting a job is a good option for your career
right
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now. We discussed that pursuing a course of any kind won't help you gain valuable corporate experience. I will suggest you opt for jobs in the retail
sector
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. As
this
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sector
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is growing exponentially and there are a lot of opportunities available. positions like store manager , store cashier, and shopping assistant are very much in demand
right
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now.So my suggestion is that please work in the retail
sector
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for two years and
then
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pursue an
MBA
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degree. All the best Rony.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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