A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. • Thank them for the present and say why you particularly like it • describe what other presents you received • explain what other things you did
Dear Harshit,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good well-being. Firstly
, your package came as a surprise to me. I am writing this
letter to thank you for sending the perfect birthday gift. Secondly
, I am particularly overwhelmed with it because of my predilection for the colour pink. It was indeed a kind and genial gesture.
On my birthday, We had a trivial gathering at home. I received a lot of offerings from my pals such
as a gun massager, a watch, a few outfits, some accessories, etc. Ever since I received the laptop, I have been flaunting it to everyone. Despite the communication gap, you understood my needs so well. Furthermore
, the laptop will not only help me with my education but also
will be my overseas companion. If you ever get a chance, please come to Canada and visit me.
It was iniquitous of you to not be a part of my special day. In addition
, you missed out on a lot of fun. We ate pizzas, and also
we danced to the latest Bollywood hits. We were extremely exhausted, nevertheless
, we even played dumb charades. It was thoroughly a fun-filled evening.
I cannot wait to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Ruchi.Submitted by ruchishah0 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite