You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Emily, I'm writing to apologise for failing to secure a contract with S&S Ltd. I understand that S&S Ltd is a crucial client to our company and the failure of getting a deal with them is a big loss to us. There was an unforeseen circumstance in that I could not manage to get the stock in time as agreed with our client for their housing project. I

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them that it was due to the supply chain disruption resulted in by Covid-19 and that we could get the stock

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one month later.

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, the client was not satisfied with it and

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decided to withdraw the contract. Even though the global supply chain disruption is out of our control, I shall make sure to manage the expectation of clients in advance to avoid

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to our clients to buffer the uncertainty of our supply chain. Thank you for your understanding. Best regards, Yi

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

164 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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