Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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leave between

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has always been a prominent topic among people. Youngsters show an inclination to visit different places and gain valuable practical experiences. Thereby, some of the students make ruling to take a break for

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year after graduating from high

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so to either travel or work.

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many individuals have seen many opportunities in

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trend, I wholeheartedly believe that not only does not take a long time off beneficial, but its drawbacks

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carry much more weight. I will support my argument in the paragraphs which follow.

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of the most detrimental consequences of not entering

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immediately after

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is owing to the fact that a significant proportion of younglings are highly social and they easily establish a close connection with new people. What I mean is that they have got a circle of friends that may

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of whom is an absurd friend. It is axiomatic that not only does not keep in touch with these so-called friends worthwhile, but they may

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jeopardize your status, as well as that, encourage you to excruciatingly absurd stereotypes.

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, absurd friends provoke youth toward menial jobs, which can form distance between them and their goals. By way of illustration, a big study conducted by

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Iranian

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reveals that 85% of Iranian pupils who took leave in 2016, could not achieve

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in their

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entrance exam. Above all,

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study illustrates, about 65% of them become addicted to

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or drugs.

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, taking breaks

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irreversible impact, especially on boys’ later academic life.

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, younglings may be provided with a chance to occupy a job with their high

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certificate. There is no doubt that these mediocre jobs easily put their future at risk.

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, if youngsters gained an opportunity to both earn a salary and live a happy life in their early twenties, they would not be enthusiastic to go back to the academic environment, because being a

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student requires you to burn the midnight oil, while ,

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they are not aware of the importance of

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degree in their both social status and income in future.

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, researchers have proven that trainees who experience a long pause between high

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are not keen on bearing

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responsibility.

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, as money is honey for everybody and adolescents are not an exception, money is given priority by them rather than acquiring knowledge. In conclusion, taking

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year off between

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undoubtedly results in numerous negative impacts.

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the drawbacks, are far exceeded by boons.