many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boyd and girs in schools. others disagree and believe it is a waste of schoo time. to what extent do you agree?

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and constant struggles for power there

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significant

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proportion of millennials who take the view that just acquiring academic skills won’t be enough for

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modern lifestyle and learning how to cook dishes will be needed to meet

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argument is that it does not take into consideration the value of time. I readily disagree with

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standpoint.

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with, childhood obesity is reaching epidemic levels, owing to the fact that juvenile’s awareness about food value

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not increased. It is proven that facts which have been taught in schools tremendously affect offspring’s future life.

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if they have learned from

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age which meals are nutritious and which

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of them

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just fattening and greasy, not only can they follow

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, but they

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can avoid

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various diseases. By the way of illustration, nowadays, pupils should be stayed alert to the influence fast foods have on their health by their teachers.

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, we are witnessing that

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generation

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highly engaged in passive hobbies and

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sedentary lifestyle exerts

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effect on their both mental and physical health.

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, it seems that they are not permitted

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their energy. So, devoting time to

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courses paves the way for being active and

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them to join in physical

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that, not only do mitigate their stress

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but

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broaden their horizon.

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, when I was a primary school student I

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part in an extra curriculum which prompted us to

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ethnic dishes. Never can you envisage how effective those courses

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, not only did we gain

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experience and gradually, we obtained a rudimentary knowledge of different meals, but

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broaden

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understanding because we were

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to cook

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other indigenous dishes of our country. Another overt advantage is that we learn how to act in teamwork

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. In conclusion, dedicating more time to

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courses should be given priority by

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authorities.

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boys as well as girls should be engorged to participate, the reason why is that these experiences are valuable whether for

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or boys and both of whom can charge their battery through these classes.