What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice

there are several discoveries in the
last
century in my country which helps to improve the living standards of people's lives and make them
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easier. Discoveries
such
as the telephone and the advancement in the medical field
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have proven to be the most important for shaping and changing the
life
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of the community.
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, I believe that the most
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beneficial
benefical
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beneficial
discovery is
the
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easy access to the internet facility for the common man.
Firstly
, the internet is the perfect place to connect and work with
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people worldwide. Many online companies facilitate
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online services to the
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society
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society
which
connent
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connect
them instantly to provide services and products faster.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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