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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have lost my certificate which was given by your course. As I remember,everything went smoothly.Even I hit a high score on an exam.After ,that all of us came together in order to celebrate

this

occasion event.We drank too much

therefore

I am unable to say the exact place where I lost it.

However

,I think that it would be in the cafeteria. I would like to point out that

this

document is so crucial for me because my company paid all my expenditures ,after coming back to work.I have to represent my certificate in order to prove my results.

Additionally

,it would be helpful to get promoted to a higher position. I would be extremely grateful if you could duplicate the new one and send it to me.

Furthermore

, the electron version is

also

adequate for me.If it is possible please remind me to note my email address. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Wed Nov 23 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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