Some People believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should Ье required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should Ье free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The individual
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Individual
think
that experts, like Change the verb form
thinks
people
who works
in health care and Change the verb form
work
engineers
must Add the comma(s)
,engineers
work
and participate with
the place Change preposition
in
that
they Correct word choice
where
were
graduated and spend their knowledge for them. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other
hand
some Add a comma
,hand
people
believed that they shouldn't
be any limitation
for these professionals. They have to feel free to Fix the agreement mistake
limitations
work
overseas. In my view
it is better to let them Add a comma
,view
to
do whatever they want.
Change the verb form
apply
First
of all, the people
who are
Unnecessary verb
apply
try
to keep Change the form of the verb
trying
people
in limitation are democratic people
. They think if they don't
give this
permission experts should work
for them. They have many other ways to cover educational
system cycle, Correct article usage
the educational
for instance
, Correct your spelling
they
the
can raise rapidly tuition fees to earn money, but they Correct your spelling
they
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prefer
perfer
to increase the costs Correct your spelling
prefer
but
don'Correct word choice
and
t
let professionals to
leave the area and force them to Change the verb form
apply
work
there. It has many issues, expert don't
pay attention to what they are doing in tough circumstances.
The next
group wants freedom. They believed that,
they own Remove the comma
apply
this
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the
rights
to study and Fix the agreement mistake
right
work
wherever they like. For
example
if a student Add a comma
,example
have
studied Change the verb form
has
Add an article
a master
master
degree, and his or her dream is to Change noun form
master's
working
in Canada, they should go, and Change the form of the verb
work
Correct your spelling
anybody
anyone
anyody
can not stop him. Due to Correct your spelling
nobody
the
recent investigation, researchers found, Correct article usage
a
people
who works
at their favourite place and major they Change the verb form
work
work
with much more patient
and accuracy.
To sum up, in my opinion, if Replace the word
patience
government
and Add an article
the government
educational
system Add an article
the educational
wants
to improve and save scientists and Change the verb form
want
people
who work
with their love, they should improve level
of their job Add an article
the level
Correct your spelling
environment
enviornment
. If professionals love to do something they do it with best as they can. So it is better to choose Correct your spelling
environment
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whatever
what ever
they want.Correct your spelling
whatever
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