In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments.

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breaking the laws between adolescents is getting worse significantly. It is considered that even young people must be punished in the same way as adults.

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, I strongly believe that teenagers should get punishment according to their age.

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relevant arguments. 

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should be mentioned that all the underage are not mature enough

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prison

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environment.

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is not the solution to reduce the number of crimes among

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generation, because the prison surroundings can worsen the situation

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committing crimes by the youngsters. It would be

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better decision to give a decent education to those who break the

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.  Another point that should

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great number of adolescents are not fully developed psychologically to be chastened like older people. The prison environment can

finally

break the body of a minor. All those teenagers who commit any

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of

crimes

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must necessarily have psychology sessions that could help

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what is happening to a young person. It is

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crucial to control the access to electronic sources of an adolescent, the control is vital to prevent the child from inappropriate and dangerous actions.  To sum up, it has to

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that teenagers should receive the same punishments as adults. Adolescents are not able to be punished in the same way as older people, because of their

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of development and mental health condition.