You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Austalia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter * explain why think you would be suitable for the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir, I am Ozan Akbulut, I have seen your advertisement on social media. That's why I wanted to contact you. I have been living in New Zealand for five years.

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, I lived in England ten years ago. Actually, I am originally a UK citizen.

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, I am a native speaker. I have been researching jobs for two years. When I saw your advertisement on Instagram I felt very excited. I have work experience with

children

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I graduated from a university which is related to

children

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care.

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, I worked with another couple who have a son.

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, I believe that I can do

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job.

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, I can teach the English language to your

children

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, I like to play with

children

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and I believe that they will like me. Please let me know whether are you interested in me or not.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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