Your are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter Say what the problem is Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing to grab your attention on a serious matter which I am facing in my residence. I am not happy with
this
accommodation and facing difficulties while living here.
To begin
with, I am a foreign student from Pakistan, I took admission
Replace the word
admitted
in
business management at your college and applied for college accommodation after getting admission. Before the commencement of Change preposition
to
classes
accommodation was Add a comma
,classes
allot
to me, but Change the form of the verb
allotted
room
is too congested and there is Add an article
the room
also
ventilation
problem. Correct article usage
a ventilation
Moreover
gas pipe is Add a comma
,Moreover
also
not functional due to which I have suffered cold
fever twice.
When you allot me Correct article usage
a cold
room
, I thought it would be quite airy and ventilated room
with full fledge amenities but this
is contrary to my expectations. In addition
to it, I was expecting to get a single room
at
Change preposition
on
1st
floor but Correct article usage
the 1st
this
is at
Change preposition
on
7th
floor where no Correct article usage
the 7th
any
window for ventilation and fresh air is.
I would request you to shift my Correct quantifier usage
apply
room
so that I can concentrate on my study with full zeal and zest. I am ready to pay extra charges if required.
I am highly grateful to you for your favour in this
regard.
Yours sincerely,
Sehrish kayani
.Change the capitalization
Kayani
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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