Write a letter to the governor of the University

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Dear sir or madam I am writing to express my concern about the high levels of

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coming from the new campus restaurant, which stays open until midnight. The loud music and chatter make it very difficult to study or sleep, especially during exam periods.

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situation is particularly problematic because many students, including myself, live nearby and need a quiet environment to focus on our studies and rest. The constant

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is affecting our academic performance and well-being. To address

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issue, I propose the following solutions: 1. Reduce

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levels by asking the restaurant to lower the volume of music after 10 PM. 2. Install soundproofing to minimize

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escaping the building. 3. Enforce quiet hours after 10 PM to ensure a peaceful environment for residents. I hope you will take

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matter seriously and take action to improve the situation. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Snoop

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider adding a brief introduction that summarizes the purpose of your letter more explicitly.

Task Achievement

In your conclusion, you might want to emphasize the importance of the changes you proposed for better impact.

Task Achievement

Clear and specific suggestions for addressing the noise issue.

Coherence and Cohesion

Well-organized paragraphs with a single idea in each, making it easy to follow your points.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

153 words

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Write a letter to the governor of the University

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected.

Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

Obesity has been found to be a serious health hazard over the world, over the past few decades. What are the causes behind it? What steps can be taken to slow down this trend?